how it ends

this is my english version of this work [link]
my concept ending for my oc of gears of war juno holstein y conceptual nothing oficial but I am working in it

concept ending:
alternate ending or optional. for a new gears of war character and jun newest oc ...kurt richardson captain of the 6th division, squad leader sigma ........
kurt is trying to protect to juno when he try to see her ... geloc was close to destroying the raven where nai and Juno are ..geloc with his powerful throws try to destroy the raven ... . kurt after not having weapons of power ... more than a hammer of dawn .... kurt takes an alternative as captain ordered to the cog soldiers shoot the hammer of dawn to the coordinates of geloc, while Kurt holds the back of geloc .- in the refinery ... Kurt grabs the back of geloc derrive to prevent the raven was a few feet from them .... and gives the order ... shoot him noooow ¡¡¡¡¡, .- kurt and juno cross looks and the captain yells at her .. I love you ¡¡¡¡¡ juuuuun -hammer impact -huge cloud of dust and flames covered the place,,,, kurt die with a lightning strike led hammer dawn to geloc ... ... Juno in shock runs to find kurt

I hope my translation be correct

after of that fragment this comic page

nspired in the song soldiers of the battalion [link]

characters:
naira-[link]
juno-[link]
kurt -[link]
geloc- [link]

tools:ms paint